Friday, October 8, 2010

Autobiographical Narrative Final Draft

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  1. You could have made it bigger you know, and I can't see it.

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  2. aww jojo, i love your essay.( genonna)

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  3. Jojo I love your story, it has many details! It almost made me cry.

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  4. Thats such a sad story but you did a good job on it.

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  5. Joseph I am happy for you and your brothers that you guys got out of the situation.

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  6. Dang JoJo I cant belive that happend to you. your story was good and it hade a lot of details.

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