Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts

Thursday, February 24, 2011

"Ex- Basketball Player " Paragraph


School athletics are important to me because sports come with many lessons and qualities along with academic motivation. I do think that it prepares young people for life because as I said before, it teaches a student a lesson, and not just for basketball, but for life and its hardships it throws at you. For Example, It teaches discipline because your coach has a higher authority that the athlete and deserves respect. Additionally, it teaches patience because in order to learn and play well an athlete needs patience. Also, it teaches teamwork. This is so because without a team nothing will succeed. As a result athletics are important in a young person’s life because of the lessons and ethnics taught.

Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Songs Containing Figures of Speech from Boys 3

6 Of 1 Thing - Craig David - Allegory
A Hard Day's Night - The Beatles - Symbolism
A New England - Billy Bragg - Idiom
A Whiter Shade Of Pale - Procol Harum - Metaphor
All You Need Is Love - The Beatles - Hyperbole
An Old Fashioned Love Song - Three Dog Night - Imagery
And So It Goes - Billy Joel - Simile
Art For Art's Sake - 10cc - Alliteration, Personification
Backslider - The Toadies - Irony
Can I Get A Witness - Marvin Gaye - Personification

Friday, February 18, 2011

Poster for the Freshmen

Similes + Metaphors + Personification = Figurative Language

Wordle: Untitled



METAPHORS:
1. A metaphor is a puzzle that's missing a piece.
2. Love is a prescribed pair of glasses.
3. Hate is a liger that sins.
4. Life is an obstacle course and you have to make it to the end.
5. Friendship is a ring on a person's hand.

SIMILES:
1. Going on pass is like a theme park.
2. The gym is like my sanctuary.
3. My house is as bizarre as seeing a unicorn eating french fries.

PERSONIFICATIONS:
1. The moon's light protects me.
2. The flower shrivels and gets mad at the bad weather.
3. My phone stays close to me.
4. A car runs on gasoline.

Monday, February 14, 2011

"Grape Sherbet" Blog post 2011


I can relate to this poem because it reminds me of when I went to my step-great grandfather's funeral. I remember walking through the cemetery not believing that there were so many dead people under my feet. The phrase that helps me imagine this scene was when the poem quotes " We thought no one was lying there under our feet, we though it was a joke.” Being in that type of situation is a bit confusing to a child’s mind and the imagery children use helps a lot. Imagery helps the reader too by letting them understand all the characters senses and it helps them relate to a time they experienced.

Favorite Food Wordle

Wordle: Untitled

Wednesday, February 9, 2011

"Remember" Homework paragraph


Lines nineteen through twenty-two mean more than what it is literally saying. These statements are logical because its big meaning is obviously true. Basically what we do creates how life is. For example, when we mess up more laws come about. Another example is how we are not just in the universe but we are. The universe is nothing without us. A final example would be that our culture, from languages to dancing, comes from us. We are more important than even we can comprehend, and the poem is helping us understand. I do agree with the two statements being logical.

"Remember" Become a Poem Paragraph


"Entering the Poets world, I think she wrote this story and published it because she thought people didn't respect themselves and where they live. Another example, If I was the poet I would have published this because I might of realized what other people don't, and I apreciate my world and all who live in it. A final example, If I were to make a poem and have it published I would do it because the way I described this poem is said in such a way the poem alone can change someones persepctive.
This poem made me feel ashamed because I see how orrible people treat each other and our world.

Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Heartbroke Response


In the poem "Heart! We will forget him!" the speaker in the poem speaks directly to her heart as if it were another person, a possible reason she talks to her heart seperately could be because it makes her feel as if she is not alone. I thnk her boyfriend cheated on her. Personification is giving non-living things human characteristics. The author uses personification and it just shows how she can cope with her problems and fell as if she had company. One way I can relate to this poem is when I was heartbroken. I felt almost this bad and I thought alot to compsny myself.

Sunday, February 6, 2011

Imagery in a Song


The name of the song that reprsents my life is called, "Runaway Love" by Ludacris and Mary J. Blige. One example is right before the hook when it says, Nothin' else to do but get some clothes and pack. She says she's 'bout to run away and never come back." That reminds me of when my brothers and I ran away four years ago. Another example is when the song states, Yells and abuses, leaves her with some bruises. Teachers ask questions, she's makin' up excuses. Bleedin' on the inside, cryin' on the out." This shows me an image in my head of when my brothers and I were abused. Lastly, when the song says, "...is eleven years old. She's steady tryin' to figure why the world is so cold," reminds me of when I was eleven and how I viewed the world. When I hear this song I am not sad, but happy because it shows me how much I've been through and just what I had to go through to get where I am at today.


"Runaway Love" by Ludacris and Mary J. Blige


Yeah and it go a little somethin' like this
Yeah and it go a little somethin' like this

Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love

Now little Lisa's only nine years old
She's tryin' to figure out why the world is so cold
Why she's all alone and they never met her family
Momma's always gone and she never met her daddy

Part of her is missin' and nobody'll listen
Momma's on drugs, gettin' *** up in the kitchen
Bringin' home men at different hours of the night
Startin' with some laughs, usually endin' in a fight

Sneakin' in her room when her momma's knocked out
Tryin' to have his way and little Lisa says ouch
She tries to resist but then all he does is beat her
Tries to tell her mom but her momma don't believe her

Lisa's stuck up in a world on her own
Forced to think that Hell is a place called home
Nothin' else to do but get some clothes and pack
She says she's 'bout to run away and never come back

Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love

Little Nicole is only ten years old
She's steady tryin' to figure why the world is so cold
Why she's not pretty and nobody seems to like her
Alcoholic step-dad always wanna strike her

Yells and abuses, leaves her with some bruises
Teachers ask questions, she's makin' up excuses
Bleedin' on the inside, cryin' on the out
It's only one girl really knows what she's about

Her name is little Stacy and they become friends
Promise that they'll always be tight 'til the end
Until one day, lil' Stacy gets shot
A drive-by bullet went stray up on her block

Now Nicole's stuck up in a world on her own
Forced to think that Hell is a place called home
Nothin' else to do but get her clothes and pack
She says she's 'bout to run away and never come back

Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love

Little Erica is eleven years old
She's steady tryin' to figure why the world is so cold
So she pops *** to get rid of all the pain
Plus she's havin' sex with her boy who's sixteen

Emotions run deep as she thinks she's in love
So there's no protection, he's usin' no glove
Never thinkin' 'bout the consequences of her actions
Livin' for today and not tomorrow's satisfaction

The days go by and her belly gets big
The father bails out, he ain't ready for a kid
Knowin' her momma would blow it all out of proportion
Plus she lives poor, so no money for abortion

Erica is stuck up in a world on her own
Forced to think that Hell is a place called home
Nothin' else to do but get her clothes and pack
She says she 'bout to run away and never come back

Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love

Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love
Runaway love, runaway love

Runaway, runaway love
Don't keep runnin' away
I'll run away with you
If you want me to

Yeah, I can only imagine what you goin' through, ladies
Sometimes I feel like runnin' away myself
So do me a favor right now and close your eyes
And picture us runnin' away together
When we come back, everything is gonna be okay

Open your eyes

Thursday, February 3, 2011

“A Storm in the Mountains” One with Nature


I went on a hike one day with my brother. We ran all the way to the top non-stop. It took about 90 minutes. When we reached the top I had to look down to see things. I saw treetops, other mountain tops, and lakes. I heard almost nothing but the breeze against my ears. At the top I had to climb a couple rocks and I stood on top of the water fountain. I did this to be on the highest point possible. I felt above everyone, and that I was free. It was a pretty intense feeling. This experience impacted my life by helping me understand where I concentrate better and showing me how much more of the world I haven't seen.

Wednesday, February 2, 2011

Paragraph to Persuade You to Read My Poem


"I Am Offering This Poem to You" by Jimmy Santiago Baca is a great poem. This poem should be read because the literary devices that are being used are great for practicing the terms and learning them yourself. The poem is about a man giving this poem to somebody. This poem symbolizes love, and he states that love is the only thing a person really needs. The only reason why someone might not read this poem is because of how sentimental and "corny" it is, but the point that it is being made with it is almost completely different. The best part of the poem is its analogies and comparisons. Or another words its metaphors and similes.

Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Imagery in a Selected Poem Paragraph


An example of imagery in this poem is "And sings the tune without the words, and never stops at all..." This example appeals to my sense of hearing. It almost makes me feel annoyed because birds chirping annoys me. Another example of imagery is "Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul..." This example appeals to my sense of sight. This makes me feel curious just imagining the picture in my head. In addition, another example is "That could abash the little bird that kept so many warm." This example appeals to my sense of touch. just the thought of this makes me feel soothed.
The usage of imagery helps express feelings by the things it makes the reader feel and/or see.

Imagery in a Selected Poem



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Monday, January 31, 2011

Dream House Paragraph with Imagery


My dream house is only a regular house. My house has two stories, and it is painted white. The outside has a color scheme of white purple and turquoise. I have a balcony that looks over the pacific ocean on the east coast. Every morning I can taste the light morning dew that drizzles all over my house. I can feel the moisture on the hand rail. I walk inside and feel on a smooth leather couch. Right in front of my couch is my hard, transparent glass table. As I head to my room, I feel my hard, black, wood bed posts. And I fall into my temperpedic bed that just surrounds my body with absolute comfort and cushions. My house smells like Febreeze because my bed is sprayed by it. Although my house smells fresh, there is still a lingering smell of new leather because I had just recently bought my new leather couches. As I doze of I can hear the ocean's waves crash and then the tide roll in. I hear seagulls that land on my porch and chirp their loud chirp. Right before I go to sleep I hear my coffee pot grinding my coffee. And as I imagine the red light going on I hear a beep. This house is not much, but it is or would be a great achievement. To achieve this house I have to just keep doing well in school, because without school there is no job, without a job there is no money, and without money there is no dream house.

Monday, January 24, 2011

Poetry Experience Paragraph


I actually like the fact that we are on the subject of studying poetry. I myself always liked writing, including poetry, but that just makes me a little bit more knowledgeable about the subject. I do know there are many types of poetry, many styles, and great complication. Anyone can write a poem, but it is the skill that is gained by practicing and mastering that gets listened to. In the past I have continuously had to read poems, break them down fore their literal meanings, and also I have had to make some of my own. When I was a little kid my older brother used to read us poems by Edgar Allan Poe, a famous poet. He is still my favorite poet that holds my favorite poem today. In this unit I would like to learn how to write poetry better, but to also have fun with it.