• Characters: Sarah: Chris' older sister, 7, brat, loving
Chris : Sarah's younger brother, 5, naive, whines a lot.
• Setting: In the backyard sandbox, at 3:30 p.m., right in front of the garage.
• At Rise: Chris and Sarah are laying in the sandbox getting all dirty.
Chris:
Sis, I want to be the bad guy!
Sarah:
O.k. Fine, but I'm the princess the good guys save.
Chris:
Ahhh! I'm going to get you!
Sarah:
Help good guys! Help!
Chris:
Haha, never!
Sarah:
I don't want to play no more. I want to play with the hose again. Then we can jump back in the sandy. Hahaha
Chris:
I want water too!
Sarah:
Okay come play with me Chris.
Chris:
Yay!
Sarah:
Turn it on brother!
Sis, I want to be the bad guy!
Sarah:
O.k. Fine, but I'm the princess the good guys save.
Chris:
Ahhh! I'm going to get you!
Sarah:
Help good guys! Help!
Chris:
Haha, never!
Sarah:
I don't want to play no more. I want to play with the hose again. Then we can jump back in the sandy. Hahaha
Chris:
I want water too!
Sarah:
Okay come play with me Chris.
Chris:
Yay!
Sarah:
Turn it on brother!
Haha this is very funny Joe, I can imagine you acting it out.
ReplyDeleteYour very detailed JoeJoe. That does sound like something you would write.
ReplyDeleteThis is a Joseph play. I mean it is so you. From begging to end. good job, It feels like it bounced around a lot but over all I like it.
ReplyDeleteAwe This Is Cute... Good Job Gamberro You Did Good.
ReplyDeleteYour Scene is very entertaining and fun. It reminds me of when I was younger at the beach. Great job jojo!
ReplyDeleteYour scene had a lot of energy coming from the characters voices. I could tell by just reading it. I think you did a good job. Keep it up.
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